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This is excerpted from my CD, The Writer’s Cave, Why Writers Write What They Do. It is available from amazon for $10. To order click here: 
The Writer’s Cave is now available from amazon for $10.
Click here to order:
http://www.amazon.com/Writers-Cave-CD-John-Lehman/dp/0974172847/
The Writer’s Cave, True Stories of Why We Write What We Do, written and presented  by John Lehman
Music
BOB: [...]

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PRACTICAL SUGGESTIONS
 

      A.         Choosing and developing characters 

pick minimum characters to convey scene
use the questions from the characterization, Exercise 3

(subtext). What is going on underneath the text.  For example, if on the day your sister dies, you are buying a pair of gloves, the subtext of her death would greatly affect the way you felt, even if [...]

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CREATING AND FINE TUNING SCENES
                                                Editing My Wife’s Autobiography
                                                I am a saboteur
                                                behind the lines
                                                eliminating adjectives
                                                adverbs and other
                                                old lovers.
                                                            -John Lehman
In the following excerpt look for:
1. description  (how much?–the telling detail, not adjectives or adverbs, get the audience to judge, use of motion, atmosphere—setting mirroring character, conflict or theme (remember “opposites,” [...]

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